jacob_rulz (jacob_rulz) wrote in emopoetsociety,
jacob_rulz
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Drowning

He is drowning in a sea of misery.
The waves of pain push him deeper into the emptiness.
Running out of breath as the hurt drags him down.
Searching for an escape, the only one he finds is death.

He is sinking, slowly.

Never to surface again.



-Okay  that was my first poem. Pleaaaaaase tell me what you thought of it.
In other words ,do I suck?
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